Wednesday, February 4, 2009

08 Soccer Season


COLLIN FEWKES
08 SOCCER SEASON
PER 1
2-4-09

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The season was underway once the ref blew that whistle my season kicked ff as we dribbled the ball down field. Martin took it up field, passed to Giovanni, passed across field to me. I passed it back to Martin. Martin took the shot but the goalie stopped the ball. We were disappointed but we had to keep our head in the game or else it would be all down hill from there. After they tried to score we got the ball back and we were going to score. Martin juked left and right as he brought the ball to Mid Field. Passed it to me as I took the ball to the goal I instantly passed the ball to Martin and the goalie. That was the First goal of the season and it’s never felt so good.

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All the players on the team were amazing. Even though I don’t remember all the players’ names. Let’s see, Martin was Mid, Giovanni was Left-Mid, I was Right-Mid/Forward, Anthony was Goalie, and that’s all I could remember. But we had the best coach you could ever have, even though he’s tough, that’s what helped us win all our games. And we had some assistant coaches but no one knew their name.

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The last game was the worst because we only played one team that entire season which was only three games. Today was the third game and it was time to score as much as we possibly could so we were on top of our game. There were so many shots on goal, passes. Assist’s, blocks, steals. Finally, the end of the game came around, the final score 8-0 us. We owned you could say, but we were bummed that it was the end of a great season.

Topic Sentence:
This essay is all about my entire 09 Soccer Season.

Conclusion:
My 09 soccer season was so amazingly awesome I didn't want it to end. I was amazed to see how well we played as a team, it was like we were all one player because we never allowed a goal that entire season I we were ready for more games, but sadly we had no games left and that was pretty much it from there. The season was amazing, so were the players, the coaches, the fans. the victory. That's why I never wanted that season to end

Friday, January 16, 2009

Visualizations 5/5




R:I had to visualiations from my book Mr. Toads Mad Adventure
Q:"Oh so many lovely boats floating on the water.How pretty, how charming,who can think about cleaning on a day like this".
S:(Mr.Toads Mad Adventure,pg 1)


C1:Mole is staring out to the river thinking when he suddenly see's his friends Rat and Badger come.


C2:I pictured Mole on a deck while the moon is glistening off the river and you see the shiny reflection in the tree's




Q:"Now we've done it.Out at at night in the Wild Wood.We stayed ti long at the Mud turtles birthday party."


S:(Mr Toads Mad Adventure,pg 6)


C1:The little fiwld mice have over stayed their welcome,now they're all alone in the Wild Wood until the little weasels came along.


C2:I imagine dark and scary woods at night with spooky trees, bats, night owls and the menacing weasles.

Harry Potter:Half Blood Prince


Harry is in his 6th adventure and in a lot of trouble.Voldemort wants his revenge on Harry for stopping him in the first place. With the help of Dumbledor, Professors and Friends, Harry will have to train harder then ever if he wants to defeat the man who took away his family and who has killed many more people. So harry is in search of the Half-Blooded Prince and if he finds items to protect himself he wii then have the tools he needs to defeat Voldemort. There is a twist in this book however, a death you would say. Yes a death about a very important person in the story, so here's who it is......................... Just kidding. Pick up the book and find out.

Thursday, January 15, 2009

Harry Potter: Deathly Hallows


In the 7th book of J.K Rowlings famous series Harry Potter, this book is definetly a great book full of twists and turns, ups and downs, left and rights. Harry is back at Hogwarts and so is Voldemort but with Dumbledore gone and no one to teach Harry, he will have to rely on his brains, skill, and the help of friends. This book is perfect for anyone who loves fantasy, romance and action. Also, there is one big part in the story. BUT I'M NOT TELLING. So pick up this book if your in for a good story.

Garfield 5th Treasury


Garfield is in his 5th treasury of greatness. Witness all the past comic strip as Nermal Visits, Odie falls, garfield makes a face out of eggs and bacon on Jon and Just enjoy that friendly scale of his. Garfield has had lots of comic strips over the years and since this is his 5th look over all of his comic strips that span from the 1990's to the 2000's. Enjoy this fat cat mania.

Wednesday, January 14, 2009

Garfield Blots out the Sun


This fat cat is back in action getting ready to cause more havok and mayham. Jon and Odie have to deal with it because Garfield will rip their eyes out if they don't so not so lucky for Jon and Odie. In these adventures Garfield does all of the following: Kicks Odie, tortures Nermal, tries to eat a bird and gets beatin up. So you better watch out for blackouts probably because Garfields blocking the Sun.

Diary of a Wimpy Kid


Diary of a Wimpy kid is about a boy named greg always getting picked on by his brother, Kids at school and much more. Now this book isn't about bullying, its about a kid tryignt o survive daily life of being the middle child and his parents always believe his little brother or his older brother. He tried out for the swim team but he triend not to drown instead of swim forward so he was bad at that. He doesn't have many friends, in fact he only has one friend. So life for greg is pretty tough and he writes all of his daily adventures in a DIARY. Try picking up this book once in a while and try and see if your like greg.